Tragedic to Comedy?

______We all know about the tragedic type of play of William Shakespeare, " Romeo and Juliet ". But how about cutting a part of a scene and make it it's opposite, or should I say , a comedy type ending? Let's see how'll I work on my ending.

______Suddenly Friar John successfully delivered the message to Romeo. And then , when Romeo already got it, he suddenly dropped the bottle of poison. And then Romeo hugged Friar John till death, but actually he loosens it up and hurriedly go to Juliets tomb. But before that happened, He encountered Paris first. At that time, he pleaded/cry in his shoulder and said: "Why did this happen???!!" , then romeo replied, " It's just a false death , so please. STOP. I have to go to Juliet before she lacks air at her tomb. Understood?"

"Woah? Really? YOU'RE KIDDING ME! RIGHT? SHE'S DEAD?"

" Well read this first."

Paris read the letter.

"Told you." Romeo said.

"Um... Okay.*sob, sob *"

"Wha---? Why are you crying??"Romeo asked.

"Please take care of her. I know she wouldn't do anything like this when I popped up into your love story. *sniff, sob* " 

Romeo's tapping his shoulder and comforts him.

"Oh man. Is that true? Well I'm so glad! You know, when she wakes up, I'll tell to her those words you said. I'M SO THANKFUL PARIS! *Hugs Paris tightly*" Romeo said and run away through Juliets tomb.

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At Juliets Tomb'

"Juliet!Juliet! I'm here to save you!" Romeo shouted while digging her tomb.

Then suddenly, he already got into Juliets tomb.

"Juliet! Juliet! Wake up! Your prince is here! *kisses her*"

Juliet was already awake and was shocked about Romeo and slaps him.

" Whaa---Why did you do that??!" Juliet said.

" Why? I'ts beacause I'm Romeo. And I'm yours. Let's go to Mantua now and make our life unforgetteble."

"Aww Romeo. Why are you so sweet? Come on let's go."Juliet replied.

"You know, Juliet..."

"What? Why?"

"I love you." Romeo said and kisses her.

"Asqyid---"*blushing**looks at him again* "I love you too."*smiled at him*

After that, the both of them wrapped their hand with their own hands and together they go to Mantua and lived together forever.

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